blog 13

Today in class with a member of our team we had to create a timeline for our blog. I don't kno why we did this because it didn't help me at all. The partner I had my teamate steven it was more of me helping him though. He hadn't watched a video yet so I told him to watch a couple then pick one he liked. It got down to the timeline and his video was perfect for the timeline. The timeline thing was confusing. I looked at mine a couple of time to see how it would help start my essay. It was more of order of sequence to me. My video was really short so didn't have to much to work with. As I started my paper though I kind of just went from what the name of the blog was to what he first started saying. Alot that could have helped me more was having an example of an descriptive essay to look at and kind of see how I could start and how I could end it. The little experience in class today was not to much help. Yes I did ask the teacher like from what to what on the timeline. What can I start with and other things. She told me to start with the name maybe and some things he might talk about. But I asked what if my video is short and he repeats alot of things. She said to make it longer just describe the background behind the person. Describe the mood the tension and also what you think and feel about it. Also they said to describe the person who is in the video. That I though added a litttle bit more to my paper. Yes my vlog was a short video and I had a hard time thinking of how to do it. But I came through with some of the paper not all. I had a hard time tryin to get six paragraphs. Also the length of the paragraphs were hurting me too. But my paper is coming along and hope it gets finished soon so I canmaybe turn it in.